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Up and Down part 1

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This was an interactive story that I had going on the Process website. Because it is finished, one cannot give suggestions as to what happens next. I hope you enjoy.

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You are Thomas Adams, and now you are not sleeping. The doorbell keeps ringing on and off. You roll over and yell out, "Can someone get that?" Still the doorbell keeps ringing. You get up and grumble. "That's right...mom is doing some errands...Looks like I'll have to get it...."

"I'm coming, I'm coming!" you shout as you go to get the door. You open the door and are greeted with the sight of Elise.

Elise is your classmate. Er...Former classmate...and best friend. You two went to high-school together. But you graduated two weeks ago. Elise is a nice girl: pretty, energetic, outgoing, smart enough. She is actually the same age as you, though a little shorter. Both of you were born on the same day at the same hospital. Your moms met in the hospital and that's pretty much why you two were good friends since childhood.

"Heya, sleepyhead!" She beamed. "Are you ready to go?"
"Huh?"
"You know..."she said, still smiling. "Our little day out today?"
"Errr..."
"You didn't forget did you?"she said as she looked at you with a small smirk. "Mr Smartypants, the valedictorian, forgot about our date?"
"DATE?!"
"Yeah...you know...Our play-date?" She said with a slightly confused look. "We're going off to collage soon, so we planed a day on the town. Our last time as kids. Remember?"
"Oh! Yeah! Of...of course!" you said slightly blushing. Truth be told, you had a tiny crush on her since the 4th grade. But you didn't tell her because...well...uh...because.

"Yeah, I remember! I just....woke up late!"
"It's 10:30. Did you stay up late...."She said with a small grin appearing on her face, "...doing something naughty?"
"ACK! NO! I was just building a model car!" No lies there. You had built a model car that night for your collection.
"OK. Well, you better get out of your PJs! Can't go around in those!"

You quickly got dressed into a T-shirt and some jeans. Elise was wearing some jeans and a green colored top. It was a button-up with no sleeves,just some weird ribbon things on the side. Was it some new summer fashion? whatever it was, she had left the two top buttons undone.

"You remember where we're going, right?" she asked you.
Actually you completely forgot..."Of course I remember." Great, you had to go and bluff.
"Is that so, Mr Smartypants?"

OK, so you're having a day on the town on a pretty beautiful day, but where are you going? "S-sure! EASY! We are going to the........
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Samarkana's avatar
Ooh my what a cutie! Very nice!